Sunday, September 30, 2012

Correcting articles and writing leads

Correcting articles and writing leads
Monday - Wednesday, 101-10/3
Goal: Students will correct their final article
Students will review lead writing

Bell Ringer:
Monday: Quiz: On a separate sheet of paper with your name at the top:
1. Name the 5 W's and H
2. Where do these elements belong in a news story?

Tuesday: Write a lead to tell students about Pink and Denim day.

Here are the details:
Students council is sponsoring Pink and Denim day on Friday, October 5th.  Students are encouraged to donate $1 during their lunch periods.  They will receive an ice cream sundae served by student council members.  Teachers can also participate.  Their cost is $5.  Everyone is encouraged to wear pink and denim for the "Pink Out" day to fight breast cancer.

Post your leads using the comment link below.


Wednesday:  What is the most important information in the following paragraph:

Write the most important facts on a sep. sheet of paper.


Homecoming is fast approaching!!! The theme for this year’s Homecoming is “A Red Carpet Affair.”  The Homecoming crowning ceremony and dance will be held on Saturday, October 13th.  Tickets for the dance will go on sale tomorrow during all three lunches.  Ticket cost is $10.00, or $15.00 at the door.  Guest passes will be available tomorrow in the front office.  All guests MUST have an approved guest pass and a photo ID to attend the dance.  The Homecoming crowning ceremony will being at 7:00 pm – admission cost is $1.00 at the door.  The dance will immediately follow the ceremony.


Procedure:
1. (Monday) Students will review, discuss and correct their news article for pri\nt
2. (Tuesday) We will discuss lead writing.  Class example will be completed together:
Click on the following link:   Writing a Summary Lead

3. Students will review workbook pages: 47-48
4. Students and teacher will discuss leads on page 49
5. In small groups complete d-i on pages 50-51 in the workbook.



Standards:
1.5.11.B- Write using well-developed content appropriate for the topic
1.5.11.C- Write with controlled and/ or subtle organization
.9.11.A: Use media and technology resources for research, information analysis, problem solving, and decision making in content learning. Identify complexities and inconsistencies in the information and the different perspectives found in each medium.
1.9.11.B: Evaluate how the techniques used in media modify traditional society.
1.2.11B - use and understand a variety of media and evaluate the quality of material produced


Friday, September 14, 2012

FIRST ARTICLES


Writing your first article

9/17-9/21

Bell Ringer: This activity is to be completed in the comment link.

-Students will read, evaluate and discuss a news article. The articles will be linked on the blog.


9/17-9/18 - No bell Ringers.  Students need the entire period to write their first rough drafts.

9/19- list two transitions you used in your article.
9/20- Comment on one other student article on www.turnitin.com
9/21 - Comment on another student article on www.turnitin.com
Goal:

Students will conduct the first stages of NEWS WRITING

Students will learn to evaluate and eliminate unnecessary information from their information gathering process

PROCEDURE:

Monday, 9/17 - Students will complete a workbook exercise to review lead writing

1. Students will complete the following assignments:

Exercise 3 pg 55 - workbook Exercise 4 pg 57 – workbook

2. Make sure your first interview (s) are complete and MEANINGFUL

3. Turn both into www.turnitin.com BY THE END OF THE PERIOD!!!!



TUESDAY, 9/18

1. Students will compose rough drafts

**each day you will turn your work into http://www.turnitin.com/

2. Students should begin peer editing (Requirement: peer edited by 5 people)

**Two of the five people will read your paper to you aloud. (Yep, you will hear your essay 2 times, and you will read it once)



WEDNESDAY, 9/19

1. Students will turn in their rough drafts after they have been peer edited by 5 people.

2. Rough drafts should be turned in to www.turnitin.com

3. Begin final drafts



Thursday, 9/22

1. Continue working on articles





Friday, 9/23 – Final Drafts due…Packets Due…No EXCEPTIONS

1. Students will finish proofing

2. Students will correct mistakes

3. Students will turn in finalized packets and score sheets

4. Students will upload their work to http://www.turnitin.com/



Closure Activity:

Using the comment link below, each day you will indicate any problems or questions you have concerning your article


1.5.11.B- Write using well-developed content appropriate for the topic

1.5.11.C- Write with controlled and/ or subtle organization

1.9.11.A: Use media and technology resources for research, information analysis, problem solving, and decision making in content learning. Identify complexities and inconsistencies in the information and the different perspectives found in each medium.

1.9.11.B: Evaluate how the techniques used in media modify traditional society.

1.2.11B - use and understand a variety of media and evaluate the quality of material produced

Friday, September 07, 2012

9/10
Bell Ringer: This activity is to be completed in the student's notebook.
-Students will read, evaluate and discuss a news article. The articles will be linked on the blog.

Bell Ringer:
Read the following activity and respond to it in your notebook. Please follow the proper form.

Monday, 9/10- In the comment link below, list any problems/ issues with your interviews/ articles
Tuesday, 9/11- List two facts you learned during your interview process
Wednesday, 9/12- Write your lead and post it in the comment
Thursday, 9/13 - High School Journalism Victory
Friday, - 9/14- Vegas Schools Go Door to Door

Goal:
Students will understand the elements of lead writing
Students will understand the inverted pyramid structure
Students will learn how to write the traditional AP,or summary, lead
Students will conduct their first interviews

PLAN:
1. Students will read pgs126 - 135 and pg 145 in their JT textbooks

2. Students will review and take notes from two worksheets:
A. The Inverted Pyramid
B. The News Story

3. Students will complete the following assignments:
Exercise 3 pg 55 - workbook Exercise 4 pg 57 - workbook

Outside of Class:
Students will conduct interviews for their first articles- Due- 9/12
**All finalized interviews must be organized, typed and turned in to http://www.turnitin.com/
by Thursday, 9/13
-Your first set of interviews will count as an actual test grade (100 points)
-Please make sure you include all information discussed: Strong details, background information, several items that could be used for a direct quote, attribution


At the end of each class, students will have 10-15 minutes to work on their articles

LOOKING AHEAD: TUESDAY, 9/18
Compose rough drafts
**each day you will turn your work into http://www.turnitin.com/
***This includes 5 peer edits


I would like to monitor your progress.

Closure Activity:
Wednesday, 9/12, -, please respond to the following-
Aside from verbal responses, how can you gather information about your subject?

Thursday, 9/13- Using the comment link on today's blog: List three topics for possible

(Be sure to write your name first!) stories
1.5.11.B- Write using well-developed content appropriate for the topic
1.5.11.C- Write with controlled and/ or subtle organization
1.9.11.A: Use media and technology resources for research, information analysis, problem solving, and decision making in content learning. Identify complexities and inconsistencies in the information and the different perspectives found in each medium.
1.9.11.B: Evaluate how the techniques used in media modify traditional society.
1.2.11B - use and understand a variety of media and evaluate the quality of material produced
Posted by journalism1 at Monday, September 20, 2010 0 comments

Tuesday, September 04, 2012

9/4-9/6 Bell Ringer: This activity is to be completed in the student's notebook.
-Students will read, evaluate and discuss a news article. The articles will be linked on the blog.

Bell Ringer:
Read the following activity and respond to it in your notebook. Please follow the proper form.
Wednesday, 9/5- High School Journalism Victory
Thursday, 9/6 - Vegas Schools Go Door to Door

Friday, 9/7-

Goal:
Students will understand the elements of lead writing
Students will understand the inverted pyramid structure
Students will learn how to write the traditional AP,or summary, lead

Students will conduct their first interviews

PLAN:
1. Students will read pgs126 - 135 and pg 145 in their JT textbooks

2. Students will review and take notes from two worksheets:
A. The Inverted Pyramid
B. The News Story

3. Students will complete the following assignments:
Exercise 3 pg 55 - workbook Exercise 4 pg 57 - workbook

Outside of Class:
Students will turn in their planning sheets to http://www.turnitin.com/ by Thursday, 9/6 Students will conduct interviews for their first articles
**All finalized interviews must be organized, typed and turned in to http://www.turnitin.com/
by Wednesday, 9/12-Your first set of interviews will count as an actual test grade (100 points)
-Please make sure you include all information discussed: Strong details, background information, several items that could be used for a direct quote, attribution

At the end of each class, students will have 10-15 minutes to work on their articles

LOOKING AHEAD: Next week:  Complete Interviews and
Compose rough drafts
**each day you will turn your work into http://www.turnitin.com/

I would like to monitor your progress.

Closure Activity:
Wednesday, 9/4, -, please respond to the following-
Aside from verbal responses, how can you gather information about your subject?

Thursday, 9/5- Using the comment link on today's blog: List three topics for possible

(Be sure to write your name first!) stories
1.5.11.B- Write using well-developed content appropriate for the topic
1.5.11.C- Write with controlled and/ or subtle organization
1.9.11.A: Use media and technology resources for research, information analysis, problem solving, and decision making in content learning. Identify complexities and inconsistencies in the information and the different perspectives found in each medium.
1.9.11.B: Evaluate how the techniques used in media modify traditional society.
1.2.11B - use and understand a variety of media and evaluate the quality of material produced

Monday, September 03, 2012

9/23
Title: Out of the Comfort Zone
Bell Ringer:
Read the following article and list any of the 5 w's and H in your response.  Use comment response link below.
Daily Reading - 9/3 -Giving Back to His School

Goals for Understanding:
• Essential Questions
o What are the differences between open and closed questions?
o How do I begin an interview?
o What is the importance of prepared questions?
o Why is it important to be a good listener when interviewing?

• Critical Engagement Questions
o Before the interview why is research important?
o Why is preparing generic questions before the interview important?
o How does active listening lead to a better interview?
o Why do you take notes during the interview?
Objective Summary: Students will discuss how to conduct an interview
Discuss the difference between open and close ended questions and how open are better.
Students will conduct an interview

NOTES:

Conducting an interview can be very nerve wrecking. The interviewer may be nervous about asking the right questions, the location, dress etc. Phone interviews can be just as tricky, since there is no face-to-face communication or body language to rely on. So if you're pursuing a career in journalism here are tips for journalism students on conducting a successful interview.


TIPS:
The best thing to do when interviewing a source is to act naturally. An interview does not have to happen in a formal, suited atmosphere. An interview is just a talk with someone about a specific topic. But instead of merely hearing, the reporter is listening and writing down the pertinent details. Reporters must keep their opinions to themselves.


Preparing for the interview
Don't go to an interview unprepared. Check newspaper files and the library for information on your subject or the topic. Have some information in your head before you start. For example, if you are interviewing a person who sells furs and is annoyed by animal rights pickets, it might be interesting to know if this person has a dog or a cat.
Have your questions ready. Don't expect your news source to tell you voluntarily what you want to know. Your questions, although you may stray from them, help you organize your thoughts. They also will remind you to get all the answers you want.

Make an appointment. You can't go into a busy office and get 30 minutes of his or her time unless you first set up an appointment. Then make sure you arrive on time.

Dress properly. Be prepared and show respect for the source.

Take three things with you on every assignment: a pencil, a piece of paper; and a grain of salt. Be a bit skeptical, don't believe everything you're told.


Conducting the interview
Introduce yourself and the publication for which you are writing.
Look your subject in the eye. Don't be so busy taking notes that all the source sees are your flying fingers and the top of your head. It makes some people nervous to see every word being written down.

Often, the first question to ask is how to spell the individual's name. Don't rely on the spelling you've seen somewhere else because it could be wrong. A misspelled name is definitely the first way to lose credibility.

Pronounce the name of the respondent correctly and use it from time to time during the interview.

Double-check the dates and the spelling of names. Even a name like Smith can be spelled differently. Don't ever be afraid to ask what you might fear is a silly question.

Start with easy, sociable questions to relax the person you're interviewing. Save the tough questions for later. Avoid questions that appear to have predetermined answers. Don't let your opinions determine the focus of your questioning.

Ask open-ended questions that invite a lengthy answer and can bring out anecdotes and opinions: ``How did you react?'' or ''Why do you think that happened?'' Try to take down as many direct quotes as possible.

Don't ask questions that let your source give one-word answers.

Don't ask negative questions. That is, don't say,''No news, yet?'' Don't make it easy for your subject to say ''no.''

Let the interviewee know you know something about him or her. This is called priming the interviewee. It goes like this: Mr. Jones, I understand you appeared in a movie about the takeover by people under 30. Do you believe this could actually happen?

Accept all facts and other data professionally. Do not argue or show undue shock or surprise.

Have a note-taking system. For example, write ''rr'' for railroad.

Avoid promising to print remarks a certain way.

Do not promise to let the interviewee read the story before it is published.

Leave the door open for another talk. Ask the subject if he or she would mind if you made contact later personally or by phone for a follow-up. Get a phone number where the source can be reached later. End the interview by making sure you have a phone number to contact the source later for further facts or clarification. If you use a tape recorder; don't depend on it. Batteries run down and tape recorders can malfunction. Take notes, even if you're using a tape recorder.


Taking notes
Some kind of shorthand is a must. Most reporters use some form of shortened writing, such as ''w/o'' for without or ''inc'' for incomplete. Initials can stand for titles and symbols can be used to refer to organizations.

Set apart direct quotes with circles, quotation marks, stars or underlining. Taking notes on one side of the paper or pad makes their rearrangement to fit story structure easier.

Listen carefully. Don't note unimportant details.

Ask for the spellings on all names and titles. It is better to ask now than to have to call back to get them. Or worse, to get them wrong in the story.

Get direct quotations, especially on the main points.

Observe details about your source and surroundings, and write down your impressions.

Concentrate on what you are seeing and hearing. Immediately after an interview, review and supplement your notes. Arrange your notes in order of importance.

It is unnecessary to write complete sentences unless you wish to get a direct quote in its entirety.

Write down specific information you cannot trust to memory: ages, names, addresses, statistics, sums of money. Try to get biographical information where needed and look for newspaper clips and other material which may be used for background information.

Do not be afraid to double-check unclear information even if you must make a follow-up call to do so.

Exciting writing is built on exciting anecdotes, so the interviewer is always listening for them. A really sharp interviewer also listens for clues to experiences that could make lively anecdotes. Then the interviewer directs the subject to ''give me an example'' or ''tell me about a time when that actually happened.''


Finding anecdotes
An anecdote is a small story. So, anecdotes can become stories within your larger story. Often, an anecdote will illustrate something about the interviewee such as his or her loyalty, bravery, persistence or a quality which a ''title story'' can illustrate. These must be carefully ''mined.''


Watch your subject
Observe non-verbals -- body gestures, facial expressions, para language (the way something is said), artifacts (what the person is wearing), movement -- of the interviewee. About 70 percent of total communication is non-verbal. Thus, if you are to tell the complete story, you must provide the reader with the complete story.


Study the environment
Bulletin boards, desk tops, pictures on the wall, file cabinets, etc. How does the sunlight stream into the room? And how does all this relate to the interviewee? Avoid using description just for the sake of description.


Post-interview interview
Some interviewees are masters at ''pulling the wool'' over reporters' eyes. So, be ready to check statements or figures with other sources. You should not take everything at face value. You should be a bit skeptical. Remember: ''If your mother says she loves you, check it out!''

ASSIGNMENT:
1. Complete your planning sheet.  Create your specific questions for your interview.
2. Try to implement the tips mentioned above
3. Get to know your subject
4. Enjoy! (Remember to smile!)

HELPFUL Link:
Guidelines for interviewing: http://www.hsj.org/Journalism_101/index.cfm?requestAction=goMenuContent&menu_id=7&CmsPagesID=257

Closure Activity: Tell the difference between an open-ended and a closed-ended question.

1.2.11.B-Use and understand a variety of media and evaluate the quality of material produced1.5.11.B- Write using well-developed content appropriate for the topic1.5.11.C- Write with controlled and/ or subtle organization

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